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Good

-       Good clear camera angles

-       Sounds well chosen

-       Speech at beginning

-       Scenes flow well

Bad

-       Need sound behind voice over

-       Fade in sound

-       Needed bar background sound (ambient)

-       Have sound all the way through scenes.

-       Music too happy

-       Need more speech art bar

-       Sounds slightly jumpy

-       Too many newspapers

-       Cancel out walking

-       Should all be in widescreen 

-       Sound jumpy

-       Speaking at beginning is too fast